Literature & Composition IV

Wednesday, January 04, 2006

Paragraph Development

Eating at the Castro Valley cafeteria appeals to me much more than dining at any of the nearby establishments. I can eat with friends and do not have to drive to get there. I also hate waiting in line at restaurants. Castro Valley High’s cafeteria is much quicker. Also, I used to work in restaurants and know what they do to their food.


What questions does this paragraph beg?
  • Why is the last sentence there? It fits the topic sentence, but it does not fit the rest of the paragraph.

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